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A Nice
Young Man
by David W. Huffstetler
The
cool air of late autumn and a panoramic view of trees clinging to tawny leaves
brought a smile, as Eleanor stared out the window of the club car. She turned
back to the knitting sprawled over the lap of her simple dress and adjusted the
spectacles on the bridge of her thin nose. “Oh, my, what is that awful odor?” A
plume of black smoke from the coal-fired engine stole its way through the open
window, past her graying hair, and into her face. Pushing and bumping and
groaning weren’t enough to close it, so she turned to the passenger riding
beside her. “Young man, would you help me with this? I cannot abide the smell
of smoke.”
“Yes,
ma’am, of course. Let’s see, yeah, there we go. The latch was stuck. Is that
better?”
“Indeed.
Thank you. You must have very strong fingers to free that latch so quickly.”
“Barrel
making tends to strengthen the fingers, if it doesn’t break them.”
“Are
you a cooper then? Wait, let me guess. I’m good at this. You’re traveling from
Nashville, as I am, and, ah, Mocker Barrel Factory. I am right, aren’t I?”
“Very
good. My brother and I spent the past three years there. That’s BJ across the
aisle, the galoot with his hat pulled down. Oh, excuse me, ma’am. I haven’t
introduced myself. Howard, Thomas Howard, at your service.”
She
offered her slight, gloved hand. “I’m happy to meet you, Mr. Howard. I’m
Eleanor Fitzpatrick of Jefferson City, Missouri. I spent the summer visiting my
sister in Nashville and now I’m headed home. I detest locomotives, but the
stage is too slow and bumpy for me anymore. And, what about you, Mr. Howard? Is
Nashville your home?”
A
broad smile crawled over his face. “Please, call me Thomas and no, ma’am. I was born in Missouri, too, near Kearny. BJ
and I were in business together there, but things turned for the worse, and we
found work in Nashville. Now, we’re headed home to try our hand again.”
“Oh,
that’s exciting. What is your vocation?”
“Finance.
We tried to expand into Minnesota, and things went poorly, but we believe we
have righted ourselves now.” He reached for his chest. “Forgive me, Eleanor.
It’s an old wound from the war, and sometimes it pains me.”
The
leather seat piped a squeak, as she turned to take his hand. “You were one of
our brave boys in the Confederacy, weren’t you? I knew it from your accent.
What battle were you shot in, son?”
“None.
I fought in more battles than I’d like to remember, and never injured once.
Then came the end of the war. I rode with a squadron of guerillas and, when we
tried to surrender, some Billy Blue shot me through the lung. I suppose we
weren’t fit to surrender.”
She
patted his arm and returned to her knitting. “Well, I’m happy to know you
survived it and survived it well, apparently. You are a well-dressed, handsome
young fellow. That’s the problem with war. It robs us of so many fine, young
men and for what? It’s all a waste of life and effort, if you ask me. Of
course, we should not misremember our sacred dead.” Eleanor rocked forward, spilling her needles
from her lap, as the train screeched to a stop. “What in the world?”
He
helped her gather her things from the floor. “Here you go.”
“Why
have we stopped? What do you suppose . . .”
“Well,
my guess is that there’s a stack of rocks on the track, big rocks, just around
a curve by a clump of trees. The engineer probably didn’t see it in time, so he
had to stop quickly.”
“How
could you know that?”
“Pardon
me, Miss Eleanor, it’s time for me to return to my chosen profession.” He swung
out of his seat, stood back to back with his brother, and pulled two pistols
from beneath his coat. “Stand and deliver!”
Eleanor
pulled her hands to her chest. She heard the sound of horses outside and men
yelling, “Hands up.”
The
two brothers circulated through the car, collecting money and valuables into burlap sacks. Then her handsome,
young man returned. He held the sack out and drew it back. “You have been
pleasant company, ma’am. I’ll not take anything from you. If you’ll pardon me,
we have an express car to rob.”
“But,
Thomas, how can you do this. I mean, I don’t know what to say.”
He
took her hand, kissed it, and said, “It’s not Thomas, dear lady. It’s Jesse.”
End
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DeleteI rather enjoyed the story. The twist was great. Enjoyed the setting as I am a fan of western stories. Thanks for this.
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